Friday Writing Response for October 2, 2009

I didn't get to play with this week's prompt as much as I hoped, but I do have one response. This is from my writing practice a couple weeks ago, a line that I ended up loving. I've taken some of the punctuation marks, thinking it might help the poem a bit.

Thoughts always welcome!



Her engagement ring needed a
funeral,
a memorial service
something to
commemorate -
to celebrate -
the time in her life when
she truly believed anything was possible
that one day
she might hope for those days to come again